One year left

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weepingwillow
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Location: In a parallel universe with my feet unable to touch ground

One year left

Post by weepingwillow » December 21st, 2010, 4:06 pm

To fathom the chance
To forever feel my hair dance
In the wind, as it blows

Not to be froze
By another dose
Too much pain
To stand on my toes

No longer tears from fears
To stream down my face
Cancer almost erased

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dadio
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Re: One year left

Post by dadio » December 21st, 2010, 4:26 pm

Moving, I can relate. Well captured.

weepingwillow
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Re: One year left

Post by weepingwillow » December 21st, 2010, 4:27 pm

Thank you dadio.

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joel
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Re: One year left

Post by joel » December 21st, 2010, 5:03 pm

I can't relate...but I can appreciate and empathize, and offers thanks.
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

saw
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Re: One year left

Post by saw » December 22nd, 2010, 9:48 am

though I can't expressly relate to your struggle I do know a bit about it...

rather remarkably, I've spent a literal five years in the hospital with two of my children diagnosed with leukemia .....my daughter was 7 at the time and my son was fourteen ( different years )......

happy to report all is well......even have a grandson from my son and his significant other

So please take my best wishes for you into your return to the real world .....

take care
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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