ELROSS LOVES GERTI.

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dadio
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ELROSS LOVES GERTI.

Post by dadio » December 19th, 2010, 12:04 pm

Elross loves Gerti to the bottom of
His heart. Well the bottom anyway, the
Way he would a dog or cat or the small

Finch his mother kept in a cage by her
Bed and would feed with seed. Gerti is his
Type of girl, the type he always seeks out

Time after time, looking for them in all
The places he expects to find her type,
All the nooks and crannies, all the cheap bars

And dives. He loves it best when she gets all
Over him, pouring out from herself all
Fears and jealousies, wants, and needs into

His ears, heart and mind. Don’t ever leave me,
Elross, she’d say, clinging to him like some
Leech, sucking away at him, putting her

Arms around his waist, don’t ever go off
With any other, Elross, don’t go sleep
With any other girl. Especially

Not those cheap bitches of the bars and dives,
Those pinched-faced thin whores who I know you like.
Elross loves Gerti to the height of his

Reach. He likes her beauty, her fine talk, the
Way she has with fornication, her walk,
Her lickable luscious limbs. Gerti would

Do anything to keep him by her side
And in her bed and his soft silky tones
Inside her head, and Elross knows all this,

Appreciates this, likes her being the
Way she is, the utter openness of
Her body, her mind, her legs, the way she

Spreads herself wide. Elross loves Gerti to
The width of his arms, the touch of his fine
Fingers, the lick of his tongue, their hot French

Kissing, the talk of sex, the naked romps,
The books on Schiele’s art, but most of all,
Beyond her upper class, he loves her eyes
And lips and hair and nose and sexy ass.
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Re: ELROSS LOVES GERTI.

Post by constantine » December 22nd, 2010, 8:05 pm

fine work. it is a pleasure to meet you.

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Re: ELROSS LOVES GERTI.

Post by judih » December 23rd, 2010, 12:26 am

very smooth raunchy piece
with or without an elross heart

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Re: ELROSS LOVES GERTI.

Post by dadio » December 23rd, 2010, 3:33 am

Thank you, Constantine and Judih.

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Re: ELROSS LOVES GERTI.

Post by Sue Littleton » December 23rd, 2010, 8:35 am

Oh man oh man, you have DONE IT AGAIN, DT! Raunchy it may be, but well written and provacative as well. Keep on keeping on, Ilustre! Sue♥

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Re: ELROSS LOVES GERTI.

Post by dadio » December 23rd, 2010, 9:56 am

Thank you, Sue. :)

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