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Post by creativesoul » January 1st, 2011, 7:45 pm

a new life
from my sons
love prevails
my youn_ men
came to me
soulful eyes
true stories
miles of ties
untold worry
sweet tears of love
tension
belief today
love tales

surrender
sweet swellin waves
time takes time
lies dead
peace is ours now
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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Re: joy

Post by judih » January 1st, 2011, 11:04 pm

"time takes time"

achingly true, creativesoul
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Re: joy

Post by dadio » January 2nd, 2011, 5:36 am

Impressive poem. Good telling.
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Re: joy

Post by saw » January 2nd, 2011, 10:48 am

the journeys of life take time, and that time defines us.....time has more of an impact on us than we do on it......good poem
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
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Re: joy

Post by Steve Plonk » January 2nd, 2011, 1:41 pm

Creativesoul, Joy is an acquired emotion... Sometimes, there is a joy in simple things which becomes extraordinary when looking through a differing perspective...
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