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saw
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Freebird

Post by saw » January 9th, 2011, 9:39 am

Get me clear mama
the whipping lizard tail
the backlash of civilization
please show me
techniques of ecstasy
how to be irrational
dance without conscience

embrace the savage movement
dive headlong into wanderlust

introduce me to my partner
I'm happy to trade my eyes
for the warm rhythm
or my mind for the trance
give me the rock, the roll
the tap dancing skeletons
the gratefully dead woes

give me a little bucolic utopia
some benign liberty, a touch
of silly nonconformity, a pinch
of miraculous tradition
the Dionysian festival of light
I'll whip out my zippo
play Freebird
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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dadio
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Re: Freebird

Post by dadio » January 9th, 2011, 11:36 am

Impressive work. Enjoyed. 8)

Hollweg
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Re: Freebird

Post by Hollweg » January 9th, 2011, 3:10 pm

Electronic wind
tingles crystal spine chimes my
heart beats out some bass.

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WIREMAN
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Re: Freebird

Post by WIREMAN » January 9th, 2011, 9:22 pm

freebird inmygadadavida....cool poem saw.......
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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mnaz
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Re: Freebird

Post by mnaz » January 10th, 2011, 3:40 am

dude! rock on! more from the hendrix/sly/marley school myself, but... rock on!

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