Sorrow

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weepingwillow
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Sorrow

Post by weepingwillow » January 13th, 2011, 2:48 am

Memories permeate
My despondent brain
Need to eradicate your
Innocuous idiosyncrasies
That brought such delight
Blackened haze devising
To envelope my weeping soul
Tormented heart, perished
Disintegrated companionship
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saw
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Re: Sorrow

Post by saw » January 13th, 2011, 7:34 am

much sadness, particularly fond of,

Need to eradicate your
Innocuous idiosyncrasies
That brought such delight
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
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dadio
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Re: Sorrow

Post by dadio » January 13th, 2011, 8:46 am

Well captured and told.
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weepingwillow
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Re: Sorrow

Post by weepingwillow » January 15th, 2011, 3:49 pm

Thank you, I was told once the Eskimos had 50 different words to describe snow. This is my 28 words to describe mourning my loss.
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Hollweg
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Re: Sorrow

Post by Hollweg » January 15th, 2011, 6:44 pm

Even the devil’s own
idiosyncracies are
sometimes quite charming.
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