Big Time Poetry Melt Word Jam 02-18-05
- Doreen Peri
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Ethnic muse
I'd have been one the Scots impaled
those pale Presbyterian goodwives
or maybe my hand would have held the stone
after all, my mother survived
those pale Presbyterian goodwives
or maybe my hand would have held the stone
after all, my mother survived
Photos by Tom Peal
- Doreen Peri
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Allow me to offer naked images,
complete with peeled grapes fed
mouth to mouth, the recitation of wealthy
verse immersed by tongues trading
hot-emberred rhyme. Allow me to be
enamored with petite charms, words
which flirt with mistaken mantras. Allow me
to shape hidden stories by bringing them to
view, each chapter, unclothed, each paragraph,
undressed, each line, stripped from every other
line, each comma, purposely placed in order to
soak in the pause between the exhales of
Love.
complete with peeled grapes fed
mouth to mouth, the recitation of wealthy
verse immersed by tongues trading
hot-emberred rhyme. Allow me to be
enamored with petite charms, words
which flirt with mistaken mantras. Allow me
to shape hidden stories by bringing them to
view, each chapter, unclothed, each paragraph,
undressed, each line, stripped from every other
line, each comma, purposely placed in order to
soak in the pause between the exhales of
Love.
- stilltrucking
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sail awayi've broken away
floating down stream
with th outgoing tide
You'll be as happy as a monkey in a monkey tree
You're all gonna be an American
loveeach comma, purposely placed in order to
soak in the pause between the exhales of
Love.
to turn up the heat
to attract her interest
so she wants to weave her spell about me
her cat is dieing and all I can think about this woman who means nothing to me except a pretty face and a million freckles and slender grace is to to listen to her. She smiles and seems happy to meet me when we cross paths, but it seems as if I am always in a hurry. Once I almost reached out and touched her arm but....
comma? no more like a coma for me
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I cannot break away from purpose.
My purpose is to become the tide.
My purpose is to ride a wave crest to
Fortunate communion, bathe in shore-foam,
Lie exposed to heart-rays, play words like a
Lute, violins orchestrated in a symphony arrangement,
Drumbeats keeping time with connective melodic phrases.
I cannot break away from purpose or harmony, each iota of
Me making love to a stanza,
And when I expire, when nature
Has her way by my demise,
My purpose may be recognized as
Folly or as a trite dream, lucid
As the breeze is lucid, true as my
Purpose.
To Love.
To die to breakaway undercurrents,
To promote the touch of fingertips
To fingertips, to spread a shore
Blanket, warm like
Summer, determined, as a
Sand grain is determined to pronounce the
Purpose of shorelines.
Tiny are the questions of value.
I cannot break away from purpose to
Present such queries.
My purpose is to become the tide.
My purpose is to ride a wave crest to
Fortunate communion, bathe in shore-foam,
Lie exposed to heart-rays, play words like a
Lute, violins orchestrated in a symphony arrangement,
Drumbeats keeping time with connective melodic phrases.
I cannot break away from purpose or harmony, each iota of
Me making love to a stanza,
And when I expire, when nature
Has her way by my demise,
My purpose may be recognized as
Folly or as a trite dream, lucid
As the breeze is lucid, true as my
Purpose.
To Love.
To die to breakaway undercurrents,
To promote the touch of fingertips
To fingertips, to spread a shore
Blanket, warm like
Summer, determined, as a
Sand grain is determined to pronounce the
Purpose of shorelines.
Tiny are the questions of value.
I cannot break away from purpose to
Present such queries.
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just playin' DJ and spinnin' some tunz for the jam
here is one by my friend and partner Barry Gremillion
it's called Old Sad Cecil
and it's from his album called Hat Songs
http://www.studioeight.tv/musicpost/sadcecil.mp3
here is one by my friend and partner Barry Gremillion
it's called Old Sad Cecil
and it's from his album called Hat Songs
http://www.studioeight.tv/musicpost/sadcecil.mp3
- Doreen Peri
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I have been soiled, buried in garden silt,
flower petals wilted without pardon.
I built a trellis from decayed and burnt
limbs, arms, legs, hands, fingers jutting up
like extensions from unfertilized virginia clay,
hardened, trampled, stomped, tamped, each
bulb buried live by fingernail digs.
It is the envy of winter still.
I await the bloom.
vines will climb with
room to strangle one another.
spring is such a
luscious time.
flower petals wilted without pardon.
I built a trellis from decayed and burnt
limbs, arms, legs, hands, fingers jutting up
like extensions from unfertilized virginia clay,
hardened, trampled, stomped, tamped, each
bulb buried live by fingernail digs.
It is the envy of winter still.
I await the bloom.
vines will climb with
room to strangle one another.
spring is such a
luscious time.
- Doreen Peri
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What if the sun decided to
Crawl behind December eyes,
Refusing to emerge when the earth
Rotated twenty-five degrees, Spring
Never again to don a nyad gown, no
Grape skins to peel, no return of heat, the
Circular axis incomplete, never the dawn of
Equinox, no vernal gift, no iris shine from
Beneath lids, nothing but icicle stabs,
Nothing but frozen tearstains, nothing,
No sidewalk cracks yielding even
Weeds to pick, to pluck, to recycle
Into compost?
What if the sun decided to
Crawl behind a February tease,
Spring only a love-threat,
Never reawakened?
Crawl behind December eyes,
Refusing to emerge when the earth
Rotated twenty-five degrees, Spring
Never again to don a nyad gown, no
Grape skins to peel, no return of heat, the
Circular axis incomplete, never the dawn of
Equinox, no vernal gift, no iris shine from
Beneath lids, nothing but icicle stabs,
Nothing but frozen tearstains, nothing,
No sidewalk cracks yielding even
Weeds to pick, to pluck, to recycle
Into compost?
What if the sun decided to
Crawl behind a February tease,
Spring only a love-threat,
Never reawakened?
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