COME UP AND SEE ME. (STRONG LANGUAGE)

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COME UP AND SEE ME. (STRONG LANGUAGE)

Post by dadio » January 26th, 2011, 4:49 am

Rachel liked to mutter the phrase come up
And see me sometime which was not the most

Original of mutterings but nor
Was the occupation she did but she

Tried to have class and put on what she thought
Was an upper class accent and wore clothes

Those other whores wouldn’t be seen dead in
The lurid red dress bright red lipstick which

Went well or so she thought with her red hair
(And any guy who doubted it was for

Real could have proof if he took her to bed
And fucked her well) and she’d stand on the

Corner of the same street (unless it rained)
And would acquaint herself and accost in

The most friendly fashion any man she
Saw coming her way even if they had

Their wives with them (what a bitch the wives would
Say) or if pushed or in the mood any

Young female that caught her eye or fancy would
Be befriended and she’d make suggestions

In her low voice and hoped the connection
Was for real and that even if the guy

Was dodgy or out on a limb she’d take
Her chances if business was poor and took

Them back to her place (some rented dive) and
Would have them on the unmade bed or floor

Or against a hard wall in a darkened
Alley but she still thought of the time her

Mother told her bedtime stories and tucked
Her up and kissed her goodnight but that was

Some time ago before the fall before
Biting the apple before the slip from

Grace and then some schmuck said in heavy tones
In the back of the car or at your place?
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Re: COME UP AND SEE ME. (STRONG LANGUAGE)

Post by judih » January 26th, 2011, 11:03 am

red musings - amazing, dadio

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Re: COME UP AND SEE ME. (STRONG LANGUAGE)

Post by dadio » January 26th, 2011, 1:01 pm

thank you, judih.

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