Wading (4 parts now, edited... added 3)

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joel
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Re: Wading (4 parts now, edited... added 3)

Post by joel » January 29th, 2011, 2:55 pm

and section 3. is hot...boil that water, mermaid (a much more awesome way to bubble the water than the one I know how to accomplish)!
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Re: Wading (4 parts now, edited... added 3)

Post by creativesoul » January 29th, 2011, 3:34 pm

water is powerful
striping away energy from the day before
ecclecticly mother earth is changing us
i like your changes
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: Wading (4 parts now, edited... added 3)

Post by creativesoul » January 29th, 2011, 3:46 pm

giver, not a taker-- like that too-
"what kind of luck is that?"
best kind!
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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