Living In My Shadow

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no1special

Living In My Shadow

Post by no1special » January 31st, 2011, 8:37 pm

The shadow I cast
too dark for love to last
stones cast

I will forgive
still
too dark for you to live

never will it be the same
you're too busy playing
the game of blame
innocent, loyal players
you fail to name
immune to the pain

this is my kingdom we live in
you refuse to give-in
the rules are plain
in my kingdom
I reign

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Re: Living In My Shadow

Post by creativesoul » January 31st, 2011, 8:49 pm

pain they say is an option- i like your writing- your process is intriguing, although, i never trust anyone.
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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