saturated in french toast and sunlight
smiles and laughter, giggling all nite
that after i love you glow
roses and snow
i hear your coyote
threatening abandonment
love will never let you go
flying fish and coral reef
sand that holds my hands
the sound of blame
excluding all goodness
is a road back to shame
walk with your head high
live well
be the change you want to see happen
fill that brain with new ideas
rock the casbah
eat ice cream for dinner
all my friends say
you are looking thinner
i lost all the baggage
thankfully so
became a swimmer
you loved me
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creativesoul
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you loved me
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
Re: you loved me
keep on writing this genre of poetry.
giggling all nite
that after i love you glow
roses and snow
( good lines)
giggling all nite
that after i love you glow
roses and snow
( good lines)
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creativesoul
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Re: you loved me
cool
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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justwalt
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Re: you loved me
the coyote thrives here in NE PA... transplanted by the auto insurancebe the change you want to see happen
fill that brain with new ideas
rock the casbah
companies years ago. I can step out my front door right now and call
them.... two or more packs will answer.
love the write
Re: you loved me
I said I loved you.
I meant it when I said it.
I know it by heart.
I meant it when I said it.
I know it by heart.
Re: you loved me
The whole flow is awesome...especially these lines, for me...really liking these.creativesoul wrote: flying fish and coral reef
sand that holds my hands
the sound of blame
excluding all goodness
is a road back to shame
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw
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