Don't let me go just yet

[no1special]

Don’t let me go just yet
set me free
give up on me
let me be
break up with me

I am only human
I make mistakes

my heart aches
too
from your mistakes

I love you deeper than I have ever loved
even more than the one
above
for you and I have the truest of loves

we have made mistakes
taken breaks

yet our hearts
still ache
from previous mistakes

I want to learn to forgive
in order
for us together forever
we may live

I love you Baby, I do, with all my heart! I can't live without you.

[dadio]

I sense this is for real. Well captured, love poem.

[no1special]

Without a doubt
a broken love
is what it's about
a lover I can't live with
or without

our words we spout
terms of endearment
beautifully spoken
may be
just a token
none the less
it's still broken

in time
one of us
will call
our lover's bluff
too much
finally
enough

away
our lover we will send
I cannot bare
the end

[Night Writer]

As I have stated before it is as if you are speaking directly to me. I have never felt so much emotion come from a poem, never one that when I finished reading this all I could do was curl up and cry. I wish the words written by you were directed to me from the man I will never stop loving, but it is not. For me I don't know when my suffering will end for the mourning loss of him. I still cannot speak his name awake, but I have been told I won't stop crying for him in my sleep. I hope your suffering end soon for you. I know your pain.

[no1special]

Nope
sorry
I'm not him

your emotions
deep
I can only skim

the surface
of the superfluous
scribble
the dribble

only time
enough
for just a nibble

you seem too sad
the brevity
of the love
you dreamt you had

for him
you have it bad

[Night Writer]

I know you are not him you just speak to me in the words I could only hope to hear out of his resonating voice. Me, got it bad, that's an understatement.

[Lao C Ryter]

It never fails to amaze me how a woman can love love a man so deeply, so intensely, so passionately, and hate that man so deeply, so intensely, so passionately.

[Night Writer]

The funny part of love
Goes hand in hand with hate
Cannot hate without loving
Something, someone, first

Women, say hate
To cover total consumption
Of their depression
The word alone
Eases pain just a little

The tears don't sting
As bad when I say I hate you
But I crumble when I think
Of my love for you

Now do you understand how death
Would be so f-ing comforting

[no1special]

It never fails to amaze me how a woman can love love a man so deeply, so intensely, so passionately, and hate that man so deeply, so intensely, so passionately.

My...what a sharp tongue you have
you scab
thrown away anything you ever had
desecrate
relationships luck bestowed on you

pockets filled with nothing but excuses
emotionally, physically, verbally abusive
wallet holds only guilt
felony warrant waits
not so elusive
disgustingly obtrusive

you're useless
a leech

a friend
in the world
you haven’t got

lazy
not even borderline crazy
diagnosed
sociopath

preying on the weak
you
the weakest of weak
your future
bleak

filthy slob
can't keep a job
con artist
your craft
rob women
of their cash
my life
you trashed
heart smashed

too afraid to fail
you refuse to try
rather spend your time in jail

she and I aren't so broken
not so much as you
bragging about how you used her
why don't you get a clue

at you
I laugh

shed a tear for you

I will not

you maggot
I hope you rot

deadbeat dad
still live with you parents
at 37
your answer
to getting a job
to the pawn shop you go
with your little brothers’
hand-me-down electronics
gifts from your family
all the while
your mother battles cancer
little brother just home from Iraq

now you decided
to be a writer
because
“it’s just lazy enough”
an embarrassment
what’s up with that sense of
entitlement

I know it's shitty
I confused love for pity

the truth
you will dispute

desolate
find comfort in a prostitute
(it's true, did you mention to her that's why I dumped you?)
taboo secrets told
as of late

I tried to find
a way to forgive
together again
we will never live
your name
again
I will never speak

it’s true
I hate
you

[Night Writer]

I knew it was you
Hiding under a new name
From the first post
You posted
Tried to hide
Know you to well
Now you know without you
I'm living in hell
Glad this is out
Still you don't know
What you're about
Unfortunate you can't
See what I see and
how beautiful you are
To me

[no1special]

It's not him, it's his X.
Can't say I didn't warn you.
You're lucky you haven't truly gotten the chance to know who he is.
I want to believe you're better than him.

He's constantly trying to re-invent himself. Trying to be someone he's not.
I'm sorry he hurt you. I was stupid, felt sorry for him. Still the same sad Jon No Fun!

Run while you still can!

[Night Writer]

Hahahahahaha
If this is you
So nice to meet you
Just kiddin
Such a hypocrite
Hope the one
Who loves to lay
With meth
Flowing through
Her veins

Don't put yourself
Too high on that
Shelf

I heard your warning
Now here is mine...
Don't contact me again!!!!
Or my family!

[no1special]

yeah haha...the one you are so deeply in love with is a junkie

this ridiculous sadness comes only from a crush

wanna talk of your addictions
contact you
you're replying to my post

should I dare
share the things in which I know about you
people you know
your family

How about a post just about you?

I'd be emberassed the things I know
for the world I could show
You don't scare me

With good intentions I did something that would have saved you heart ache
gimme a break, you stalk someone you didn't even date one a poetry site.

You should have listend to the Boor!
I think you should take care of the happenings within your own home.

[Doreen Peri]

Reads like you all know each other in real life.

Could you do me a favor and take it out back? I don't wanna be the cop on the block or anything but if these are personal notes to each other riddled with name calling under the guise of poetry but you're really for real fighting with each other, well, could you please use chat or the telephone, or meet outside behind the gas station or sumthin, OK? *smile*

Just sayin'.... I don't want to get involved but being the admin and owner of this site, I have a responsibility to state that public arguments where members belittle and call other members names don't fit here.

Your personal arguments are none of my business or anyone else's business but your own. Thanks for keeping them to yourselves.

It's really practically the only rule we have on S8.

Be nice.

Thanks.

............

Also, please forgive me if I've misread this thread and completely misunderstood. Perhaps it's just really poetry and you don't know each other at all.

I donno.

If that's the case, let me know please.

[Doreen Peri]

Please note that I have had reports of abuse of the Studio8 private message system. This is not allowed here and won't be tolerated.

Also please note the following from the Terms of Service you all agreed to when joining this site:

"You agree not to post any abusive, obscene, vulgar, slanderous, hateful, threatening, sexually-orientated or any other material that may violate any laws be it of your country, the country where “Poets and Artists Community – Studio Eight” is hosted or International Law. Doing so may lead to you being immediately and permanently banned, with notification of your Internet Service Provider if deemed required by us. The IP address of all posts are recorded to aid in enforcing these conditions. You agree that “Poets and Artists Community – Studio Eight” have the right to remove, edit, move or close any topic at any time should we see fit."

I am locking this thread.

Please take your personal problems with each other elsewhere.

Thank you!