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Night Writer
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Next...?

Post by Night Writer » February 8th, 2011, 4:24 pm

Quite the martyr
Without beliefs
Sense of morals molested
Reality manipulated
Views hazed
Set a blaze
Always name victim
Corrupting self sacrifice
Bleeding wounds, vulnerable
Left with sounds
Of only
A single path
Along the
Beaten trail
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saw
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Location: B'more, Maryland

Re: Next...?

Post by saw » February 10th, 2011, 7:47 am

the sounds of the beaten trail is a terrific image, really made me think.......
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
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creativesoul
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Re: Next...?

Post by creativesoul » February 11th, 2011, 2:33 pm

nice path
drumming is good
heart beat?
high blood pressure?

nice
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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