BLUE GIRL

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dadio
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BLUE GIRL

Post by dadio » February 11th, 2011, 4:55 am

Blue. Blue eyes, blue dress,
Blue ribbon in the hair. Yes,
He remembered that way.
Every time he saw blue, he

Saw her. He thought he saw her
In paintings, in theatre crowds,
On street corners, in cafes.
But it wasn’t her, just some

Other. Can’t we just be friends?
She’d said, without all that
Sexual side of things? He’d
Said, yes, of course, but each

Time she turned and swayed
Her hips, he wanted her more
And more. Maybe she loved
Another he often told himself,

Maybe she just wasn’t into that
Side of things some girls aren’t.
Blue skirts, blouses, scarves,
Maybe panties too, he never

Knew. She’d gone off with friends
To Amsterdam; promised a
Postcard; bring back a small
Gift. While she was away, he

Wrote to her house each day.
Posted the letter and prayed
She’d read them all in one big
Swallow. When he thought she’d

Arrived home, he rang. This is
Getting too heavy, she said over
The phone, we need to chill out,
Put space between us, take things

One foot at a time. Her voice
Seemed far away, chilly, not
Quite up to par; seemed cold
In fact, like some burnt out star.
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Re: BLUE GIRL

Post by creativesoul » February 11th, 2011, 2:18 pm

valentines day write? sweet
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reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: BLUE GIRL

Post by dadio » February 11th, 2011, 2:48 pm

thank you creative soul. 8)

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Re: BLUE GIRL

Post by saw » February 11th, 2011, 4:35 pm

let's here it for all the blue people.......
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If you do not change your direction
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Re: BLUE GIRL

Post by dadio » February 11th, 2011, 4:38 pm

yeah, thank you saw. 8)

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Re: BLUE GIRL

Post by creativesoul » February 11th, 2011, 10:07 pm

like that! sweet, the blue people poem is growing
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: BLUE GIRL

Post by dadio » February 12th, 2011, 4:08 am

Yes, a long may it do so, creative soul 8)

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