A Wish

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Night Writer
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A Wish

Post by Night Writer » February 6th, 2011, 12:25 pm

Lie to me please
Pretend you love me
As you did before
Pretend all you said
Was true
Act as if you cared once
Wrap me in your arms
Set my body on fire
From your desire
Just give me one day
just one

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Re: A Wish

Post by creativesoul » February 11th, 2011, 2:22 pm

i like this one- it has warmth and opening, and a sweet humility- naturally it appeals to those of us that have been bumped, dumped or fired....peace
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reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: A Wish

Post by dadio » February 11th, 2011, 3:42 pm

Think I have felt this once time in my distant past. You have captured it well. 8)

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Re: A Wish

Post by creativesoul » February 11th, 2011, 10:09 pm

i grant you your wish
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reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: A Wish

Post by Night Writer » February 11th, 2011, 11:55 pm

Very cute thank you (:

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Re: A Wish

Post by creativesoul » February 12th, 2011, 2:20 pm

so did you feel
everything you needed to feel?
like the tide
ebb and flow
have to grow
even when you know
it will change everything you love
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: A Wish

Post by Night Writer » February 13th, 2011, 4:07 pm

Sorry the pup didn't bring
The warming love i need
When confronted with my wish
I found myself over taken
By emotions
Uncontrollable emotions
That i couldn't find
My voice

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Re: A Wish

Post by creativesoul » February 13th, 2011, 6:44 pm

puppy love
is so much easier than grown up love
why people want to control emotions, belches, farts..
is kind of the problem
letting go of old ideas
every day
the ones that held us up
for inspection or admiration
all washed away
we all sneeze
yet it just is not so pretty sometimes

real love is larger than need or passion
it grows with you
around you
no matter who is there
or not
the jewel
is how to keep
the dreams alive
thrive
as an evolved soul
growing, knowing
it will change again
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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