inventory day

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Lao C Ryter
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inventory day

Post by Lao C Ryter » February 13th, 2011, 4:26 pm

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if words could mend the holes in my quilt
night would be lost for my shiver.

-FIN
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dadio
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Re: inventory day

Post by dadio » February 13th, 2011, 4:38 pm

Fine poem.
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Night Writer
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Re: inventory day

Post by Night Writer » February 13th, 2011, 5:47 pm

Inventory needs to be
Checked and checked again

Open the cupboard
You'll discover
A jar
One with at least
Two hearts
Two i can show you

One a girl
So young and sweet
The other
A woman
That is me


Nice write Lao, sometimes we need to see ourselves through someones eyes.
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saw
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Re: inventory day

Post by saw » February 14th, 2011, 11:53 am

wry and succinct.......nice work
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
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