Of My Own Volition

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Lao C Ryter
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Of My Own Volition

Post by Lao C Ryter » February 14th, 2011, 4:24 pm

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if words could mend the holes in my quilt
night would be lost for my shiver.

-FIN
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Re: Of My Own Volition

Post by saw » February 15th, 2011, 11:10 am

I hope this isn't autobiographical, as it provides the intense imagery of despair to the point, and then further shocking the reader with it's surprise ending ..... leaving a lingering compassion on the tongue........very sad indeed.....
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
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