thunder

[creativesoul]

the thunderbeams came tonite
i lay naked in a bed that belongs
to a man in fiji
i could love him more

but the whore in me
wont play mistress
anymore
i abhor the idea of another womans man
but i think i do
late tonite with the lightening
i am struck with
some of us were married to the wrong people

i wonder if all that is real between us
woulg go away
if i betray myself
tell him so
maybe later

[dadio]

I have never been one for self confessional poems, but you do it so well.

[creativesoul]

thanx

[saw]

good honest work c-soul......all relationships are mistakes...ha.......on some level it's true......when they are give and take and the balance self regulates itself, it can be nice....but it would seem there are far more that are one sided to the point of being unhealthy.....have you seen the movie Love and Other Drugs ( Anne Hathaway & Jake Gyllenhaal ) ?....it's an interesting look at an unconventional relationship and how it changes along the way......it reminded me of some relationships I was in in the past....it's a good flick.....

[joel]

......all relationships are mistakes...ha.......on some level it's true......when they are give and take and the balance self regulates itself, it can be nice....but it would seem there are far more that are one sided to the point of being unhealthy.....

Unbalanced and broken, our conversation's spoken
in love-longing lips' song for relationships more strong.

[creativesoul]

tanx