LUNA AMORE by Cher

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Cher
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LUNA AMORE by Cher

Post by Cher » February 26th, 2011, 4:49 am

perfect sphere silver
tidal pull ebb low and far
time for sand in toes

hot body cool waters
dipping toes in frothy waves
sizzling couple re-engage

eastern breezes touch skin
swollen mouths cool souls refreshed
love burns hot again

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Re: LUNA AMORE by Cher

Post by Steve Plonk » February 26th, 2011, 12:28 pm

Cher, Great lunar love poem! 8)

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Re: LUNA AMORE by Cher

Post by dadio » February 26th, 2011, 1:28 pm

yes, yes. very good poem. :)

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Re: LUNA AMORE by Cher

Post by Cher » February 26th, 2011, 1:52 pm

Thanks guys.. I was trying for a haiku trio..not sure if i got it..but whose counting syllables..I just throw it to the wind.....

Glad you liked it

Cher

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Re: LUNA AMORE by Cher

Post by Perdida » February 26th, 2011, 6:13 pm

really really lovely Cher, love the ending line especially.

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Re: LUNA AMORE by Cher

Post by Cher » February 26th, 2011, 7:14 pm

Thanks guys....I have quite a few more pieces on my blog..you are welcome to go take a look and comment if you like...

I am preparing my anthology so the pieces are there

http://www.cherbeautyglam.blogspot.com

again thank you for your lovely comments here.

Regards

Cher

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Re: LUNA AMORE by Cher

Post by joel » March 1st, 2011, 3:35 pm

Cher wrote:but whose counting syllables..I just throw it to the wind.....
...there's another heiku tucked in your wisdom....
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Re: LUNA AMORE by Cher

Post by Cher » March 1st, 2011, 4:39 pm

Thanks guys

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