The reason I hung up on you......

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littlemiss
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The reason I hung up on you......

Post by littlemiss » March 1st, 2011, 6:07 pm

I’ve grown tired of excuses
your relentless pursuit of victory
when it concerns me

no longer we are bound
my fears or my tears
for you
they carry no sound
don’t keep looking back
for love you once found

just take a look around
pieces of my shattered heart
lie in mounds
sadness all around

put it to bed
nothing left to be said
this love is dead

no longer matters
whether you loved
or
tried your best

it’s in the night you crept
with many others you slept
in your heart
my best interests were never kept

stop pretending
like you didn’t fail me
too much time you're spending

hoping for a tie that binds
a thread of hope you’ll find
a common fiber to wind
around these two broken hearts
for these hearts
there is no mend

it’s too late
countless tries
careless lies
no replies
you know our fate

I see through your disguise
a caring man
a thoughtful friend
for this I will no longer stand
please
we are over
it is the end.
Little Miss

saw
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Joined: May 23rd, 2008, 7:32 am
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Re: The reason I hung up on you......

Post by saw » March 4th, 2011, 7:08 am

when it's over it's over......as your poem deftly expresses.....nice release.....
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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