hollow daze

[saw]

one by one
the teardrops fell
concentric circles rippled out
like salty confession

I treat dogs well
I'm friendly to passersby
even though their blueteeth
frighten me

but I feel it slipping away
like the reliable tide
that has no intentions
of coming back

the erosion of love
that killed life
I know it all too well
the zombie mutants

will have their way with me

[joel]

I'm friendly to passersby
even though their blueteeth
frighten me

but I feel it slipping away

Yes. This is awesome. But hold on, friend...we can't let go yet.

[constantine]

mutant blue-toothed zombies are the worst. durable, they keep on coming. you need multiple head-shots to do the trick. i'm with you to the bitter end, brother saw.

[saw]

thanx joel for recovering this from the abyss....and for the kind comments on top of it

dino, yes the bitter end....that's when you add too much Angonstura to your Manhattan, right ?.........

[ButterflyKiss]

This is one of the first things I ever read on S8! I love it! Blueteeth totally creep me out! I love this poem!

[saw]

thanx so much butterfly k.......you are very kind......