FAT DAMES LOVE. ( STRONG LANGUAGE)
FAT DAMES LOVE. ( STRONG LANGUAGE)
Whether the fat dame
Has a good sex life,
Bud doesn’t know, he
Doesn’t want to think
About it too much,
Nor imagine he
Making love to her
As such, but guesses
She has feelings like
Everybody else,
Needs to be loved and
Cared for, wants to feel
Wanted and of some
Value, but what can
A thin guy do? Bud
Muses, seeing her
Asleep in the big
Armchair, butt naked
Like some huge beached whale.
He creeps closer on
Tiptoe, listens to
Her breathe, watches the
Rise and fall of her
Huge bust, takes in her
Sizable thighs where
One of her hand lies.
He wants to think she’s
Loved and wanted by
Someone, maybe fucked
By some brave fellow
(No, not brave, maybe
Kind and big-hearted).
He backs away (she’s
Just farted) but there
Is some beauty there:
The tone of skin, the
Loving heart, maybe,
Dark black hair. Whose dame
She is he doesn’t
Know; he hopes they’re worth
Her love and care and
Treat her kindly in
Her sad days and dark
Despair. Bud takes one
Final look at her
And blows her a kiss
As she sleeps in the
Big black leather chair
Has a good sex life,
Bud doesn’t know, he
Doesn’t want to think
About it too much,
Nor imagine he
Making love to her
As such, but guesses
She has feelings like
Everybody else,
Needs to be loved and
Cared for, wants to feel
Wanted and of some
Value, but what can
A thin guy do? Bud
Muses, seeing her
Asleep in the big
Armchair, butt naked
Like some huge beached whale.
He creeps closer on
Tiptoe, listens to
Her breathe, watches the
Rise and fall of her
Huge bust, takes in her
Sizable thighs where
One of her hand lies.
He wants to think she’s
Loved and wanted by
Someone, maybe fucked
By some brave fellow
(No, not brave, maybe
Kind and big-hearted).
He backs away (she’s
Just farted) but there
Is some beauty there:
The tone of skin, the
Loving heart, maybe,
Dark black hair. Whose dame
She is he doesn’t
Know; he hopes they’re worth
Her love and care and
Treat her kindly in
Her sad days and dark
Despair. Bud takes one
Final look at her
And blows her a kiss
As she sleeps in the
Big black leather chair
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Re: FAT DAMES LOVE. ( STRONG LANGUAGE)
great work dadio.....a dose of innocent humor from the speaker carries this, and what a surprise, ... I was caught up in the my empathy for the fat woman, when she unexpectedly farted on me...ha ha......an interesting veer
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
you may end up where you are heading
Re: FAT DAMES LOVE. ( STRONG LANGUAGE)
human is human. Thank you for reading & understanding this, saw. 

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Re: FAT DAMES LOVE. ( STRONG LANGUAGE)
fat is beautiful
compassion opens eyes in this piece, dadio
and lucien freud - well, the painting is marvelous
compassion opens eyes in this piece, dadio
and lucien freud - well, the painting is marvelous
Re: FAT DAMES LOVE. ( STRONG LANGUAGE)
Judih, thank you.
Re: FAT DAMES LOVE. ( STRONG LANGUAGE)
i'm laughing at this word play....when i ride the bus those big butts sure do get in the way.....awesome painting!
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....
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Thank you, Wireman. Yes, I love Lucien Freud's art.
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best love is on my insides, fat or thin- i just cant win...
i love this...
i love this...
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
Re: FAT DAMES LOVE. ( STRONG LANGUAGE)
Thank you, creative soul.
Re: FAT DAMES LOVE. ( STRONG LANGUAGE)
Skinny design,
wide space for dreams.
She rests.
wide space for dreams.
She rests.
Re: FAT DAMES LOVE. ( STRONG LANGUAGE)
Merci, Arcadia.
Re: FAT DAMES LOVE. ( STRONG LANGUAGE)
In my experience
with love, the bigger they are,
the harder they fall.
with love, the bigger they are,
the harder they fall.
Re: FAT DAMES LOVE. ( STRONG LANGUAGE)
thank you for reading, hollweg.
Re: FAT DAMES LOVE. ( STRONG LANGUAGE)
You were really on your creative voice on this one. Really like the read, and the clever wording was wonderful. You're really gifted.
I know I have the same curse.
I know I have the same curse.
Re: FAT DAMES LOVE. ( STRONG LANGUAGE)
thank you for reading & comments, Merlynh
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