Sammy and the Queen taking tea together

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joel
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Sammy and the Queen taking tea together

Post by joel » March 31st, 2011, 10:39 am

The tea tastes bitter when it’s brewed too long,
when tannins bleed; it bears resemblance to
a byway puddle, tinged with twigs and strongly
stained by leaf decay— it’s broken through
the borders of good taste: non-potable.
But no one likes to waste a cup of tea—
and, therefore, we can bless our gullible
humanity and all the sugar we
commingle with the bitterness we drink
and think is sweet— while honey, cream and dream
are mixed to mask our lack of sense. You wink;
I grin— we know we’re never what we seem.
Our tea’s a shame, our party-date’s a sham
between the Queen of Hearts and Uncle Sam.
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

saw
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Re: Sammy and the Queen taking tea together

Post by saw » April 1st, 2011, 6:43 am

terrific metaphor joel.....I won't be daring and speculate, it's unnecessary since you are describing a phenomenon, a method, for dealing with any form of bitterness.....but I suspect dropping Uncle Sam's name is significant...good poem
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emel.scott
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Re: Sammy and the Queen taking tea together

Post by emel.scott » April 4th, 2011, 3:35 am

saw got it about spot on from where I sit. A bit of a departure for you into politics...or maybe not. Always a pleasure to see what you've been up to.
We should not mind if on our ear there fell. Some less of cunning, more of oracle...Thoreau

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Re: Sammy and the Queen taking tea together

Post by snowman » April 4th, 2011, 4:37 am

never met a 4 i didn't like
awesome job

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