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Post by creativesoul » April 4th, 2011, 2:07 am

i never really knew her as a woman
i was just a kid
truth is.. i never knew what i did
that made me feel like i had three feet
she seemed graceful and beautiful
i was akward and needy
she was my mother
sometimes
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Post by dadio » April 4th, 2011, 2:53 pm

deep. one of hell of a poem too. 8)

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Post by creativesoul » April 4th, 2011, 10:55 pm

thanx dadio
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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