Pages 19 & 20

[Artguy]

Skeletal ribbons buttressed by herculean columns
Carry the commute of bedroom towns
Coffee and donuts - eggs sunny side up - bacon extra crispy
Sight of barren hills and silver malls
Bumper to bumper construction ahead
Radio blaring chaos in the wind
Closer to work to home every wheeled rotation
Bumper stickers gives you the news
Jesus saves and abortion is murder
Father - Sun and Holy Coast

[judih]

this piece sounds like the makings of a ballad
(thumbs up)

[Doreen Peri]

Cool! Love it! When's the book coming out?

Can I ask how you're creating it? CreateSpace maybe? or Blub.com?

[Artguy]

I am going to send it to couple of publishers. I have a friend who self published so I am going to pick her brains. This will probably take me until the end of the year. perhaps in time for xmas.

[mtmynd]

I, for one, will be looking forward to your book, amigo.... good stuff here.