A note to My Love

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Cher
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A note to My Love

Post by Cher » May 10th, 2011, 9:36 am

My Love,

What words do I use
to tell of my love for you?
My heart is no longer troubled
Missing beats no longer I fear

I may not say this often
as at times I am scared that
if I do say
I would turn you away
Stay with me
Forever?

Forever
True measure of this concept
we do not possess
We imagine it is beyond where our minds can best
perceive its tangibility

I wish not for eternity
I will live for today
I will cherish your presence
The air we breathe
together


Forever?
No,
Now!

I am in love with you

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dadio
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Re: A note to My Love

Post by dadio » May 10th, 2011, 2:23 pm

I have commented on this elsewhere. I do like your clarity of expression, Cher, and the theme of the poem.

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Cher
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Re: A note to My Love

Post by Cher » May 10th, 2011, 2:31 pm

Thanks again....I appreciate the support

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joel
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Re: A note to My Love

Post by joel » May 10th, 2011, 9:10 pm

I love you; yes, and even more
than ever I could say I do
and all my love is lovely for
the one I love to love as you
and so, because I so adore
the one we are when we are two
united lives, I'd reassure
you that I love you. Yes. For true.
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

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Cher
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Re: A note to My Love

Post by Cher » May 10th, 2011, 9:20 pm

Hey Joel

Is this your own love note? I Likey!!!

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