He watches the young
Waitress in the coffee bar
Lift her arm and hand and
Pull down on the lever of
The chrome coffee machine.
She looks, to him, like a young
Louise Brooks, but with blonde
Hair, not black, but she looks
Quite similar to the actress from
The back. He’s seen her in old films
And books, not the waitress girl,
But Louise Brooks, but this young
Girl right here holds his attention,
He studies her as she moves, the
Arms, the waist, the hips, the cute
Swaying ass. She had served him
A few minutes ago, her small hands
Like delicate flowers, had arranged
His tray with cup, saucer, and milk
Jug and plate of chocolate muffins.
He smelt her perfume, it lingers
Still, like lilies in a closed room.
She turns and her bright blue
Eyes seem cloudless like those
Holiday brochure photos of hot
Summer skies. He watches as she
Serves and smiles and attends the
Needs and wants of customers.
Her blonde hair, so like Louise
Brooks, frames her features,
Gives out that beauty, but also
That seriousness of one who
Reads and studies classic books.
He sits and sips his cappuccino
Slow, and senses an inner warmth
On viewing the coffee serving girl:
A fire like kind of heat and glow, that
Pleases him like one escaping snow.
JUST LIKE LOUISE BROOKS.
JUST LIKE LOUISE BROOKS.
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Re: JUST LIKE LOUISE BROOKS.
well developed tension that many I'm sure can empathize with....the allure of grace and beauty....a perk beyond the coffee.....the inexpensive thrill of being a fly on the wall...well done, terry
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you may end up where you are heading
you may end up where you are heading
Re: JUST LIKE LOUISE BROOKS.
thank you for reading & comments, saw. 

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