The Bark

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the mingo
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The Bark

Post by the mingo » May 20th, 2011, 2:21 pm

due to the conditions imposed and
known as "temporary traffic" all poems
fall under the headings of sacred wells
and/or holy healings

all travel will be summit based
or a basement crawl

a king size bed will be made
for the north american indians
so that nouns can name everywhere
and verbs can vibrate freely

buffalo robes & desert blankets
are optional but having some
extra attack in your sandwich
could be a good thing

and, as always, to correct
corrupt plumbing remember to photograph
trees growing on top of huge round stones
with a woman leaning on them whose
one hand waves to you
while the other hand
touches the bark
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: The Bark

Post by SadLuckDame » May 20th, 2011, 7:35 pm

Yes!
It's perfect, mingo.
A good mingle and headstrong.
`Do you know, I was so angry, Kitty,' Alice went on...`when I saw all the mischief you had been doing, I was very nearly opening the window, and putting you out into the snow! And you'd have deserved it, you
little mischievous darling!
~Lewis Carroll

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Re: The Bark

Post by the mingo » May 21st, 2011, 12:36 am

Thx Doll for your enthusiasm & glad you enjoyed!
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: The Bark

Post by stilltrucking » May 21st, 2011, 3:08 am

we need a strategic stockpile of poetry
that was 8) nice mingo,

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Re: The Bark

Post by the mingo » May 21st, 2011, 9:10 am

a strategic stockpile of poetry
now there's a notion with snap. A whole poem all by itself. thx. 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: The Bark

Post by saw » May 21st, 2011, 9:30 pm

yes, an arsenal of poetry to use against the madmen driving the train.....poems so powerful they make drones look like toys.....now you're talkin'....
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: The Bark

Post by Arcadia » May 22nd, 2011, 2:31 pm

what a detailed tapiz!!!! & enigmatic saturnine end!!! :lol: :D

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Re: The Bark

Post by the mingo » May 22nd, 2011, 6:50 pm

Thx, Veronica 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: The Bark

Post by constantine » May 22nd, 2011, 7:01 pm

i like when she touches the bark - always a turn on. nice, dadaistic.

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