Sometimes to see you is so far

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Perdida
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Sometimes to see you is so far

Post by Perdida » May 31st, 2011, 5:23 pm

Sometimes to see you is so far
as if you were an island in the horizon
remote:

but when a change in tide
carries you to me like a small boat
tugging

oh how my ears
prick
to the sound of your waves

i feel the rush of you

and i am anchored
by your sea music.

(C)Maria De Liseo 181210
The path to true love isn't always straight.
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Re: Sometimes to see you is so far

Post by the mingo » June 1st, 2011, 12:53 am

8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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Re: Sometimes to see you is so far

Post by dadio » June 1st, 2011, 2:49 pm

fine poem & theme.
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Re: Sometimes to see you is so far

Post by Arcadia » June 1st, 2011, 5:30 pm

lovely, Maree...! :D gracias for sharing it!
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Re: Sometimes to see you is so far

Post by Exsurgent » July 12th, 2011, 2:24 am

Lovely imageries, in a series of analogies.
Specially liked the crowning ending.

"and i am anchored
by your sea music."
Nicely written!
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