"Hi, my name is Susan with xxxxx Home Services"

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"Hi, my name is Susan with xxxxx Home Services"

Post by ButterflyKiss » February 26th, 2011, 7:01 pm

She’s grown on me with each day that passes
sits up front
confronts the masses
approaching each customer that passes

Sometimes, she succeeds and gets her lead!
She’s after the cash
just like everyone else, she needs.

She’s got a story similar to me
her companion
life partner
to death
she lost.

Susan has a story
just have to do a little friendly exploring
the one whose path
daily I cross
a woman’s story
carelessly,
I almost tossed.

I, too well
know her pain
just a little chit-chat
during the day
one with the same mundane routine.

The day I learned of her familiar pain
the day a bond began to grow
more I got to know.

Did you know she’s a song writer
a little lighter
unknown fact.

About the woman up front…
on the attack!
`*.`~ButterflyKiss~`.*`

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Re: "Hi, my name is Susan with xxxxx Home Services"

Post by dadio » February 27th, 2011, 11:39 am

Splendid poem. :)

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Re: "Hi, my name is Susan with xxxxx Home Services"

Post by ButterflyKiss » February 27th, 2011, 5:10 pm

Thank you.
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Re: "Hi, my name is Susan with xxxxx Home Services"

Post by saw » March 9th, 2011, 7:44 am

I've read this a number of times, and really like it....it reminds me of some relationships I struck up with homeless folks when I was rehabbing houses in the city.....interesting characters, everyone....sometimes their worlds turned upside down by a simple twist of fate.......nice work butterfly
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you may end up where you are heading

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Re: "Hi, my name is Susan with xxxxx Home Services"

Post by ButterflyKiss » June 7th, 2011, 11:50 am

This was literally a text message response to a co-worker that was being a little less than kind. Just a quick reply to remind that we have no right to judge, in my role as spokesperson for the underdog! I told you that I am aflicted by rhyme and my thougts have a rythem. I unfortunately and most often lack the patience or skill in arranging them into something beautiful.
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