Where did she go?

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ButterflyKiss
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Where did she go?

Post by ButterflyKiss » June 18th, 2011, 1:10 am

Where did she go?
Did she say where she would be?
Or how to reach her?
Why doesn’t she want to be me?

Is it our place to set her free?
Extract her from the misery
I’m afraid that on her own she will never see
just how beautiful her life could be.
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Re: Where did she go?

Post by dadio » June 18th, 2011, 5:44 am

moving poem.

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Re: Where did she go?

Post by Perdida » June 19th, 2011, 5:11 pm

on must believe that their life (or life in general) is beautiful to be able to see just how beautiful it is.

lovely

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Re: Where did she go?

Post by creativesoul » June 26th, 2011, 8:16 am

really liked that- sad sometimes- being the last to see it- been there- lol-liked the compassion and poetic flow as well
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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