After You're Gone.

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dadio
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After You're Gone.

Post by dadio » July 15th, 2011, 2:33 am

After you're gone
they'll draw the curtains,

lock all doors,
put away the booze

and wash the glasses,
stoke the fire,

shut up the books,
go to bed

in a rush
and whisper

about you
and what you said.
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constantine
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Re: After You're Gone.

Post by constantine » July 15th, 2011, 11:12 am

one would hope so. i like the minimal approach to this poem. it says it all without belaboring the point.

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Re: After You're Gone.

Post by dadio » July 15th, 2011, 3:25 pm

thank you, Constantine.

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