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Post by bennie » February 24th, 2005, 5:31 pm

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Post by stilltrucking » February 24th, 2005, 5:38 pm

i think you just took five years off my life with that one. :D


How did you do that?
Have you figured out how to use the HTML thingy? A table?

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Post by bennie » February 24th, 2005, 5:43 pm

well, after about, roughly, six thousand eight hundred and twelve attempts at getting the [pre] tag to work I just formatted it in photoshop, saved it as a gif and posted a link to the gif.

haha, it looks like it's just a normal studio 8 post. did it frighten you?
"that little scots fucker can work the html, the bastard"

no html. it's just a poem formatted and saved as a gif.
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Post by mousey1 » February 25th, 2005, 1:10 am

Nice Bennie, both visually and wordly.

A word picture for sure. A beautiful sentiment the way I'm reading it, is it a beautiful sentiment?

I'm curious about the roots of this....

If I attempted something like this it would be an unreadable mish mosh.

:cry: I don't know how to work the tab key. Well, I can work it but it doesn't work. Oh, the things I would tab...I could indent to my heart's content.

Stop taking years off of still's life, he's like me, he can't afford to lose any of them.

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Post by stilltrucking » February 26th, 2005, 12:28 am

between bennie making me feel five years younger and kyla curling my hair with her rants, I got to say laughter is the best medicine.

I am sorry you took that picture of yourself down, made me feel like a happy old man. you are a foxxy looking rodent sister. I threw my Poster of Minnie in a Bikini away and now have a poster of you on my wall.

I have a one eyed parrot name tinker jack that recites poetry.

And today I found a feather growing on my chest

and the cirlcle will not be broken



jacky

Time: she knows time.

that man that is not your man is a fortunate man

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Post by mousey1 » February 26th, 2005, 4:51 am

Ha, 'tis an endearing picture fo sho, one of my best. I miss the old girl too, but was time for time. Ooooh, Minnie gonna be ticked!

You say nice things jacky, thank-you.

Does tinker jack really recite poetry? Cool.
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Post by Arcadia » February 26th, 2005, 8:48 am

great!
saludos,

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Post by hester_prynne » February 26th, 2005, 4:10 pm

Ahhhh, what a read to wake up to Bennie....

Each time I read it, I feel like I'm sittin on a lily pad, listening to the breezes talk to me.

first rate poetry you got going on here, if'n you ask me....

H 8)

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Post by bennie » February 26th, 2005, 5:18 pm

mousey1. the her and she in the poem is me. I do that often. I make myself female in poetry.

Not sure why. Maybe it's to disguise the autobiographical element or maybe I see myself as a literary girl. who knows.

glad I gave you a mornng smile Hest.

thanks for reading me Arcadia.
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