involuntary ranting

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saw
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involuntary ranting

Post by saw » July 30th, 2011, 9:50 am

wanting to know ?
fucking A right it was addictive
the high grade shit, brother
but you gotta be cautious,

considering too many things
will string you out,
asking too many questions will
pump you up like a steroidman

gone berserk
but c'mon can you really keep 'em
down on the farm once they have
been to the whore house

this thinking thing, man
this little love affair you have
with your fantasy self
forget it, man, just give it up

thinking ain't never gonna let you go
you're in for good, for the long haul brother
you are bound for places you can
well....................only imagine.
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Harlequin
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Location: Minnesnowta

Re: involuntary ranting

Post by Harlequin » July 30th, 2011, 6:22 pm

"gone berserk
but c'mon can you really keep 'em
down on the farm once they have
been to the whore house"

Good point... Enjoyed the work. You kinda have a fan in me, now. :)

saw
Posts: 8697
Joined: May 23rd, 2008, 7:32 am
Location: B'more, Maryland

Re: involuntary ranting

Post by saw » July 31st, 2011, 10:41 am

thanx so much harlequin, i can use all the fans I can get, they tether me to the earth.....thanx again for the kind words...
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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