Man without a face

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creativesoul
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Man without a face

Post by creativesoul » July 31st, 2011, 6:24 pm

The string of light
Came tonight
Took me out
To the stars
Honored me
Sleepy
I was amazed
Next day
I was ok
The words I heard
Seems absurd
To pray for the man
Without a face
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

theirishsea
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Re: Man without a face

Post by theirishsea » August 1st, 2011, 12:03 am

I'm not sure I get the reference here to the Man without a face. God? Yourself? The universe? But that's only my speculation. You might have something entirely different in mind.
The Irish Sea Is Always In Turmoil, Even When Calm.

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dadio
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Re: Man without a face

Post by dadio » August 3rd, 2011, 4:34 am

Intriuging poem. Enjoyed.

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