gray muzzle

Post by **jota** » February 27th, 2005, 12:32 am

he's going gray and white
on the underside of his snout
this mad mutt of mine
three dogs long
and a half dog tall

he's going gray and white
still he laughs
big head out the window
grinning mutt
tongue hanging out
sniffing the wind

what the hell does he smell?
him and his giant snout
filled with crocodile teeth

he's going gray and white
maybe a year from now
all white
I hope he's still around
this mutt of mine

he's the only dog I ever had
that laughed with his eyes
like he secretly could fly
around the room
with those long soft ears of his
so long as nobody else was around

Post by **Lightning Rod** » February 27th, 2005, 12:37 am

jota,

you are such a fine fucking poet

my tongue is hanging out

and my eyes are laughing

Post by **jota** » February 27th, 2005, 12:41 am

thx LTR
I finally figured out how to navigate around this place.

St8

my new HOME!

ps...pls don't say anything but secretly I think ltkcks has been deveined and deboned, drained of life

thank glad this place is ALIVE

Post by **sooZen** » February 27th, 2005, 1:03 am

ahhh buddy, so nice to see you. I'm sure you're gonna love it here, we Lee's sure do.

Love doggies too. Sounds like you have one of the 'GREATS'!

Smacks and hello to Mermer.

SooZ

Post by **jota** » February 27th, 2005, 1:08 am

that little boy Jayden Underwood
was my third cousin

the little boy, who was murdered last week

smacks to you and Nate and Mr. Cecil Lee
life is the NOW

good to hear from you, my good ole phar Lepht friends

Post by **sooZen** » February 27th, 2005, 1:14 am

My condolences dear Jay...you are right, NOW is the only time.

Peace,
SooZ

Post by **WIREMAN** » February 27th, 2005, 8:28 am

surprise, surprise
the eyes of the
dog do hypnotze
and it is more than
a dream, the thoughts
we glean from our best
friends....................

Post by **Dave The Dov** » February 27th, 2005, 8:35 am

My condolences go out to you as well.
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Post by **bennie** » February 27th, 2005, 9:34 am

hello jota

i liked your poem. i really should write a poem about my dog. but he's such a cheeky toddler of a dog he'd take the poem from my hand, rip it on the floor and laugh with his eyes so I'd have to start again.

Post by **judih** » February 27th, 2005, 12:37 pm

a dog flies around the room
while pretending to be earthbound
we who always fly, let our tail take off

Post by **Arcadia** » February 27th, 2005, 1:12 pm

what the hell does he smell?

I like this line.

hester_prynne · Post by **hester_prynne** » February 27th, 2005, 2:37 pm

Mr Jota!
Hey man, I dig tha crazy, smilin, flyin dog!

(Not to mention seeing your sterling words!)

H

Post by **mtmynd** » February 28th, 2005, 10:36 am

Welcome, again. I hope you're more comfortable this time around.

dog days
dog ways
dog says -
"life is as good
as my master"

Post by **mousey1** » February 28th, 2005, 12:13 pm

What a lovely, sweet, happy, funny, bittersweet poem.

I love dogs. I have two.

I really enjoyed this read...
those gray muzzles, those loving eyes
they'll get you every time.

Nice to meet you.

"three dogs long
and a half dog tall"

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gray muzzle

gray muzzle

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