ONCE.

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dadio
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ONCE.

Post by dadio » August 25th, 2011, 2:24 am

Once upon a year
Maybe it was around
Christmas tide and
The choir had stopped
Outside some building
In the evening mist and
You were carol singing and
Lovely she moved onto your
Lips and kissed and it was
Like some angel had touched
You and you never wanted
That moment ever to end
And it felt as if God had woken
From a deep dream and seen
The beautiful effects of love
And remembered and maybe
Years later when you heard
She’d died with cancer and
You had never married her or
Made love to her you sensed
Part of you die and it seemed
As if there were a few less stars
In the dark night’s cold sky.
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Kailashana
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Re: ONCE.

Post by Kailashana » August 25th, 2011, 7:08 am

Oh, so beautiful, oh so true. Love and the visions of love connects us in ways we have yet to dream.

Thank you.

~A

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Re: ONCE.

Post by dadio » August 26th, 2011, 1:47 am

Thank you, Anna.

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Re: ONCE.

Post by Mary66 » August 26th, 2011, 5:01 am

I agree it is a beautiful poem dadio.....Inspiring
A good friend is what you are
and what I aspire to be,
keep my company until
I close my eyes Forever.

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Re: ONCE.

Post by dadio » August 30th, 2011, 2:05 am

Thank you, Mary66 :)

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