dionysian ecstasy

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dionysian ecstasy

Post by neologistic » August 31st, 2011, 12:18 pm

let's garden the floor with wine, roll around in passions, cradle each others' worlds and glide into the writhing skin of each others' scents, ride a line of thickening clouds and dance in laughter's chase, you feed me fruits and she'll taste your fingers' juices, we'll watch dawn blush and hide behind trees and watch it lose a battle with disappearing mountain cover, make autumn think it's spring already and spread flowers peppered with cinnamon at the spirits in the hall, frolic into unending bliss for days and days

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Post by Atehequa » August 31st, 2011, 8:30 pm

Beautiful imagery.

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Post by saw » September 1st, 2011, 6:27 am

sounds good to me.....I like the language you use, it paints an escape from the mundane.... or worse.....which can't be a bad thing....was particularly fond of,

"garden the floor with wine"........very original
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Re: dionysian ecstasy

Post by neologistic » September 1st, 2011, 9:41 am

Thanks, both, glad you all seemed to enjoy it. Just a fleeting daydream that escaped onto my screen, thought I'd share it

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Post by Kailashana » September 1st, 2011, 10:43 am

Yes! We both sing September's song, eh?

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Post by judih » September 1st, 2011, 11:33 am

your share is my gain - thanks, neo

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Post by Doreen Peri » September 1st, 2011, 3:55 pm

lovely writing. as always :)

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Re: dionysian ecstasy

Post by neologistic » September 1st, 2011, 4:04 pm

Thanks, guys :D

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Post by theirishsea » September 1st, 2011, 6:57 pm

Dionysian ecstasy has it all over Apollonian ecstasy.

Some nice imagery
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