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Post by sonofthesun » September 8th, 2011, 12:04 am

the third person
when you gonna listen
ants on your lap
eatin your crumbs
dead folks fillin your head
and ....
there aint nothin goin on
its all been said
done
and even pretended
when is is gonna be done
the dream brought to day
thoughts made whole
an end to the daylight dream
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Re: now

Post by sonofthesun » September 8th, 2011, 12:06 am

i hate you
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Post by creativesoul » September 9th, 2011, 8:11 pm

I guess "if nothing changes- then nothing changes"... If you love or hate - darth- you are still in the loop - perhaps a bit of ala- non would do you good- not your mommy, sister...daughter- do take your resentment somewhere else- your spying and stupid warlock tricks are getting OLD- wise up!
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Post by creativesoul » September 9th, 2011, 8:12 pm

Aloha
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Post by sonofthesun » September 12th, 2011, 6:01 pm

what are you talking about? laughs. spying and stupid warlock tricks? i dont really understand any of your post....uh...please elucidate. thanks
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Post by creativesoul » September 13th, 2011, 1:42 am

Sure anytime- laughing
Ditto
Whatever
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Re: now

Post by sonofthesun » September 13th, 2011, 10:48 am

i love you.
shalom
poopybutt
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Re: now

Post by creativesoul » September 14th, 2011, 9:39 pm

The girl the woman
The grandmother
The one that used to live here
Changed her address
So many times
Tired of running

Facing what is
What was
Can only heal
No silencing
No critics
The curtain goes down
Show is over
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Re: now

Post by sonofthesun » September 14th, 2011, 11:15 pm

as its always been
from birth to something else
its you that lays the law
all else is second fiddle
its how much do you want to play the game
how much do you want
how much are you able to let go
in order to be your own person
knowing how it places you within this "society"
the truth is just that
we are a part of what makes it
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Post by creativesoul » September 15th, 2011, 12:58 am

I can only dO what I can do
Forgiven myself for not living up to others expectations
From where I had to go to
Hear
What I needed to hear
I was not born to be docile
I was born to actively participate
In all societies
I wanted more than anyone could give
Even if some wished I did not miss the bus
I was still late
The last point is- cannot live with hate-
No need to banter or debate
This is something you will do
When love is true blue
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Re: now

Post by creativesoul » September 15th, 2011, 2:03 am

Never could play the game
Every time I tried
Old movies and re- runs
Things I could not control
Places I lost in my very soul
I wanted to be so much more
Even when I snore
The defects I tried to fix
Were part of some strange lay away
Payment plan- never sure if I can-
The afflicted love I tried to cultivate
Took all I could generate
The wonder that you score
When loving that which you truly adore
I am just not able
Timelessly watching cable
If you wonder
If I love you
Know that I do
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Re: now

Post by Kailashana » September 15th, 2011, 7:02 am

Now.

But when is it not now?

Loved the thread. Loose and tight.

~A

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Re: now

Post by creativesoul » September 15th, 2011, 11:51 pm

Yeah- pretty tight- welded souled- thanx
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Re: now

Post by sonofthesun » September 22nd, 2011, 1:06 am

its me and you
knowing
just what is true
its a simple glance
a touch
no more than a thought of chance
our love knows no bounds
given
with a thoughless gaze
i see you
as you see me
a piece of the wheel
making what is
beautiful
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Re: now

Post by creativesoul » September 23rd, 2011, 12:08 pm

yet
i wanna know
what it is like
to love like that
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