the.../...sky ( for saw )

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the.../...sky ( for saw )

Post by the mingo » September 10th, 2011, 11:44 am

the neighbors are exploring the magic
of carpentry - the spirit within can't be owned
and belongs to everybody don't ya know ?
the sound of the passing traffic fading away
in our ears will be the last thing any of us will hear
the gizmo is a born coyote
carrying tribal chants & a saxophone & ya gotta
be careful not to spill water where people
can see it to turn ya in...it's not what ya say but !pull that knife! -
it's how ya say it or didn't ya know that poetry
is not words at all
but music so no smilin' now and don't look at me, you,
just get to work leave communication for those ain't left Africa yet
out in cool even cold europe we nobbing with the neanders
these cats conservative as all hell but it got them this far &
don't sell them short for lookin' the way they do & don't be surprised 'bout how
they can bring the market down on you
just because they are built close to the earth
and you are gracile
still, the real fun won't begin
'til we all get to america
man I can't wait to create alabama !
sitting next to a short-haired brunette driving a cadillac top down
who hands me a full clip for my AK-47 and know that she,
in her heart of hearts, be smilin' when I pull the trigger
to empty that clip all into the pursuit of happiness sky
attitude, man, attitude !
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: the.../...sky ( for saw )

Post by creativesoul » September 10th, 2011, 7:25 pm

Nice write- hopefully - for you as well-
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Post by the mingo » September 10th, 2011, 9:22 pm

Thx, I did have a good time with it - I just like it best when things just come out and you don't have to screw with anything - like it best that way when it comes to this kind of thing - pure nonsense - emphasis on pure. It's gotta have that rolling thunder quality or I just get bored. Straight from the hip. The "poetry", whatever that is, is already there. You just want to release that and then get the hell out of the way. Since you can't make a living with this shit you might as well have all the fun you can with it or you will miss about all you're to get. 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: the.../...sky ( for saw )

Post by Kailashana » September 11th, 2011, 8:21 am

Smiles.

"Get out of your own way" something I heard coming like a loud booming voice from nowhere while I was taking a shower many years ago. Something I've
been doing ever since.

Grazie.


~A

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Post by the mingo » September 11th, 2011, 8:47 am

~A, and ya do it pretty up and walkin' good ! 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: the.../...sky ( for saw )

Post by creativesoul » September 11th, 2011, 1:43 pm

Poetry- the hidden secrets
Of culture love sweetness- comes floating off the words with mysterious kisses- thank you for your words here
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: the.../...sky ( for saw )

Post by saw » September 11th, 2011, 6:31 pm

thanx for the nod, and completely agree with the stream of consciousness thing..

when things come to you rapid fire as if you are merely the vehicle, let it fly as stands....it's its own thing.... and doesn't need to be tweaked.....there may or may not be a higher purpose, but why take a chance fucking things up with our obsessive meddling.......good stuff
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: the.../...sky ( for saw )

Post by the mingo » September 11th, 2011, 7:52 pm

8) saw & to you too cs 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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