she rocked the surface
made the ground more solid
the grass more green
the sky higher
years & years ago
when some of the roads around here
were still hard packed gravel
and the river's songs
were not as old
rockin' the old
rockin' the old
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
Re: rockin' the old
smoooooth.......
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
you may end up where you are heading
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creativesoul
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Re: rockin' the old
Sweet
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
Re: rockin' the old
Thx, folks. 
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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Kailashana
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Re: rockin' the old
Really a wonderful sublime poem. Subtle.
Thank you.
~A
Thank you.
~A
Re: rockin' the old
Thx, Anna & you're welcome.
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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