the baby moon

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the mingo
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the baby moon

Post by the mingo » September 26th, 2011, 1:25 pm

the baby moon
floats over
darkness
as her mother poses the rest of the family
on the steps of their home
which is an asia of covered streets
where a man walks with his young daughter
and reaches out his arm
his hand open to her
his fingers pointed towards
the earth
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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dadio
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Re: the baby moon

Post by dadio » September 27th, 2011, 2:55 am

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SadLuckDame
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Re: the baby moon

Post by SadLuckDame » September 27th, 2011, 6:10 am

A beautiful little piece in life.
Thank you, mingo, for sharing with us.
`Do you know, I was so angry, Kitty,' Alice went on...`when I saw all the mischief you had been doing, I was very nearly opening the window, and putting you out into the snow! And you'd have deserved it, you
little mischievous darling!
~Lewis Carroll

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