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Re: now

Post by creativesoul » September 23rd, 2011, 12:10 pm

coffee
sunrise
looking towards the east
new beginnings
i wish sometimes
i could share this with you
but maybe
i am wrong about so many things
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: now

Post by sonofthesun » September 24th, 2011, 1:55 am

unsure of happiness...
but i know my thoughts,
and all are welcome.
let us kiss the rose of infinity
share tears for what it is
we can be
but are not
There is no empty space

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Re: now

Post by sonofthesun » September 24th, 2011, 2:07 am

its hard to say when its all within your mind...and another's...the equation doesnt exist...its worth depends on something unquantifiable...we all are owner's of our own universe...its just how much are we willing to share...
There is no empty space

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Re: now

Post by creativesoul » September 24th, 2011, 12:59 pm

write me some more- better than sex
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: now

Post by creativesoul » September 24th, 2011, 1:01 pm

if i could have coffee with you
i think i could be well
if i could touch your face one last timer
perhaps all this meant something
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: now

Post by patrick traveler » September 24th, 2011, 6:57 pm

This one got to me. Reminded me of the Book of Ecclesiastes somehow. Liked the "ants in your lap"--nice touch. Good write.

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Re: now

Post by SadLuckDame » September 24th, 2011, 9:57 pm

When she gave the crumbs to feed the ants.
I think it was a thirty foot drop, down, down to the little sandy houses.
Woulda, shoulda, coulda gave them the whole battered cake,
but I know women and she was too long looking him over
to leave her thoughts wonder on the small creatures more than thirty-eight seconds. This was a good reminder. Thank you.
`Do you know, I was so angry, Kitty,' Alice went on...`when I saw all the mischief you had been doing, I was very nearly opening the window, and putting you out into the snow! And you'd have deserved it, you
little mischievous darling!
~Lewis Carroll

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Re: now

Post by creativesoul » September 28th, 2011, 1:34 am

happy is such a manipulation no white picket fences sprouting up
feeling kinda of like seeing you- touching you- but the claw of surrvival holds me back
from afar i feel you
wanting the stars to kiss your soul at night
hold tight, happy is what you make it
could be cupcakes, painting- a job- volunteering
but the box of rocks is gone
wishing you understood
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: now

Post by sonofthesun » September 30th, 2011, 1:25 am

when we sit together
its just like miles apart
seperation only
in the body of the beholden
my brain to yours
might as well be one
knowing each breath
gives sustenance to the other
There is no empty space

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Re: now

Post by creativesoul » September 30th, 2011, 2:08 pm

so what now?
the music
the sunrise
the ceremonies
healing
did any of it have meaning?
did you love me or what dream did i fill? or spill?
no pills could fix what had been broken a very long time
i thought if they were dead it would change the scar
the predator
z
they lurk in families, dads foster homes and silly dreams of love
my daughter is up for slaughter
if im too blind to see
what these things did to me

did you ever care? or was it all despair?
what love did you feel?
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: now

Post by creativesoul » September 30th, 2011, 2:12 pm

if love is forever i want you now
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: now

Post by sonofthesun » October 4th, 2011, 3:58 am

is it recompanse
or acknowledgement
for the deeds been done
your eyes dilate
slow breath in
the past comes back to life
does it matter
now
if it even did then
let us make belief
in something better
and let our now
celebrate our then
and observe the children
illuminate
that nothing is in vain
now and in forever
There is no empty space

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Re: now

Post by creativesoul » November 4th, 2011, 4:43 pm

ok-so how
do we do this
without the residue
of the past
will it last
or is it all gas
if it is true
i will see you
now
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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