fingertips(a sock in the jaw)

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sonofthesun
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fingertips(a sock in the jaw)

Post by sonofthesun » September 30th, 2011, 1:59 am

the slight touch of flesh
fingertips
felt more than a kiss
slight eye connect
stomach drops
and quickened pulse
did I know love pure
at 6
There is no empty space

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Re: fingertips(a sock in the jaw)

Post by dadio » September 30th, 2011, 7:44 am

good poem; enjoyed.

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Re: fingertips(a sock in the jaw)

Post by Kailashana » September 30th, 2011, 8:21 am

At 6 we don't know we're sock puppets.

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Re: fingertips(a sock in the jaw)

Post by creativesoul » September 30th, 2011, 2:02 pm

fingertips
yesterday
at six i was playing with my cat on the beach
i was in love with a kid down the beach
i think until seven we are in a world that is our own set of finger prints
dont let anyone tell you that a child is a sock puppet
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: fingertips(a sock in the jaw)

Post by creativesoul » September 30th, 2011, 2:02 pm

fingertips
yesterday
at six i was playing with my cat on the beach
i was in love with a kid down a few houses
i think until seven we are in a world that is our own set of finger prints
dont let anyone tell you that a child is a sock puppet
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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