haphazard assessment

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saw
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haphazard assessment

Post by saw » September 29th, 2011, 11:04 am

well, what do you say
when the fiber optics are severed
when civility is the last morsel
in the feedbag of communication

when ad-libbed ideas don't sound sincere
is turning the other ass cheek
part of evolution in a polite society
run amok, or am I just a good second story man

breaking into your head
without permission albeit without malicious
intent, a misdemeanor of reckless tongue
of feckless non consequences

in a long life of asked-for-it knocks
sucker punches, raps on the knuckles
from sister jo jo's leather ruler
her habit dripping with perspiration

lumps on the noggin of my very own
bobblehead bouncing violently in the rear
window of the lovemobile, lead foot
on the steel pedal, blue fingers

on the wheel, careening off the hopeless
guardrails, flipping on the sunroof, skidding
along the heartless macadam
as the deputy in charge of explanations

hides behind the billboard of reality
staring off into the dark highway space
of thunderclap road
radar gun in his lap.......set on "stun"
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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dadio
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Re: haphazard assessment

Post by dadio » September 30th, 2011, 3:37 am

Good poem; enjoyed.

saw
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Re: haphazard assessment

Post by saw » October 3rd, 2011, 3:56 pm

thanx terry.....stream of consciousness poem........
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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