Poem/Bittersweet

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edsiejka
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Poem/Bittersweet

Post by edsiejka » October 13th, 2011, 12:41 pm

Bittersweet

by Edmund Siejka

Alone
I watch
The house across from me
The people who live there
Keep to themselves
A shallow creek
No wider than a man’s gait
Water no deeper than two feet
Runs as a boundary between us.

The house once had a broken window
A gaping hole
That gave the house a reckless character
Like the missing front tooth
Of a mischievous young boy
Now it’s been covered by wood
Nearby, inexpensive white plastic chairs
Thin, stained and unused
Line the side of their house
Inviting phantom guests
To sit down.

In the upstairs bedroom
A curtain drawn as blinds hangs
Brightly colored
Defiant in the face of poverty
Inside a girl hides a diary from her parents
And dreams of the day when she is grown up
Young lovers kiss in the darkness
A hungry baby’s whimper is heard in the night
A radio
Left out on the front stoop
Plays a familiar song
To an empty street.

The people living next to me
Are proud
Keeping what they have
Admiring their courage
I ask myself
Who am I to complain?

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the mingo
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Re: Poem/Bittersweet

Post by the mingo » October 13th, 2011, 2:42 pm

8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Poem/Bittersweet

Post by dadio » October 13th, 2011, 3:52 pm

Good poem & theme.

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Re: Poem/Bittersweet

Post by Kailashana » October 13th, 2011, 7:24 pm

Loved your poem, a real slice of life...it is my pleasure to read it and reminds me of what should make one humble. Not for the gated communities.

Nice to meet you.

~A

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Re: Poem/Bittersweet

Post by judih » October 14th, 2011, 11:55 pm

life in all its locations
forever pumping thought
and poet appreciation

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