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the mingo
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last night

Post by the mingo » October 13th, 2011, 2:57 pm

last night i heard
the whispering of
autumn rain & wind together
beyond the walls of my house
today the traffic rushes by with roars
all whispering forgotten
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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Re: last night

Post by saw » October 13th, 2011, 10:36 pm

the commute can really fuck up your dreams...the manic expressions of the internal combustion box......thank the stars for the evening........
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
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Re: last night

Post by judih » October 13th, 2011, 11:59 pm

whispers contain roars
quiet wisdom has patience
till all foolishness steps aside
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Re: last night

Post by the mingo » October 14th, 2011, 8:29 am

Thx you guys 8) ...ain't it a hell of a grand day?
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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