a joyful kill

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Kailashana
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a joyful kill

Post by Kailashana » October 12th, 2011, 1:49 pm

a joyful kill 6/10/10


when there’s nothing left
and words fail to have meaning,
when my poetry floats in a somber grey
brackish stream
and I am swallowed like a fish,

then
I will confess my silence
and say no more, my Love,

my life will have been lived
in Your memory
like an insatiable hunger
Your insight burning away all that sunlight
from this flesh, uncoiled,
dreams we shared briefly

You and I,
inseparable
inside these paper walls of my heart
blossoming like a rose.
thundering like a strange fire.

c

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dadio
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Re: a joyful kill

Post by dadio » October 13th, 2011, 3:04 am

Yes, there is a Russian feel to this fine poem. Love it.

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Re: a joyful kill

Post by judih » October 14th, 2011, 11:50 pm

tribal resonance
love a pyre
energy release

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