...bright

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the mingo
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...bright

Post by the mingo » October 14th, 2011, 8:26 am

my stiff aching cock
in you is how i feel
about you
about your whole thing
about your being here
about being with you

i mean you can see
how it is for me with you
how i have hidden nothing
how the deep and the surface of the deep
are one thing

and i don't need the sunrise
because we are the sun and
the sky it lives & rises in
and ... sometimes i have to drop the blind
the morning sun rises so bright
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: ...bright

Post by judih » October 15th, 2011, 12:03 am

this is a gorgeous piece - something to open mic in quiet honesty

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Re: ...bright

Post by the mingo » October 15th, 2011, 12:38 am

judih thx 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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