FRIEND IN NEED.

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dadio
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FRIEND IN NEED.

Post by dadio » October 22nd, 2011, 2:17 pm

O’Brien went to the same school
as you and used to thieve from

local shops and kid’s pockets and
bags and from the teacher’s desk

and probably from his mother and
father if he was at home asleep in

his chair and he used to take things
openly from the tuck shop without

paying and borrow things and not
give them back. O’Brien was your

best friend at school but never stole
from you for some reason anyhow.

You often wonder what happened
to him and what he’s doing now.
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Re: FRIEND IN NEED.

Post by judih » October 23rd, 2011, 10:37 pm

O'Brien - a legend, he'd be pleased to be so immortalized

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Re: FRIEND IN NEED.

Post by mnaz » October 23rd, 2011, 11:15 pm

times were (are) tough ...

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Re: FRIEND IN NEED.

Post by dadio » October 24th, 2011, 2:46 am

Thank you, Judih & Mnaz. Yes, O'Brien would indeed.

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Re: FRIEND IN NEED.

Post by creativesoul » October 24th, 2011, 6:18 pm

beautiful!
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: FRIEND IN NEED.

Post by dadio » October 25th, 2011, 1:21 am

thank you, creativesoul

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