Men At Drink

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edsiejka
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Men At Drink

Post by edsiejka » October 25th, 2011, 2:25 pm

They sit there happily drinking
TV on
No one paying attention
Some talk about their aches and pains
War time experiences
Or family and sons.

Some prefer not to speak at all
Just staring into their drink
Facing old visions of unspeakable hurts.

Whatever it is, men drink
To forget or to remember
Well, which one is it
That makes men drink?

You stare out the window
Watching snow softly falling
Covering everything in a white mantle
And then you decide to have another drink.

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dadio
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Re: Men At Drink

Post by dadio » October 25th, 2011, 2:50 pm

Well done and written.

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Arcadia
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Re: Men At Drink

Post by Arcadia » October 26th, 2011, 1:58 pm

To forget or to remember
Well, which one is it


yeah, let it snow ...

gracias for the poem, edsiejka!

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Re: Men At Drink

Post by creativesoul » October 26th, 2011, 11:09 pm

men and drink === i have no tolerance for that' sad thing is- they really are numb- senti-mental idiots with pictures of children they are not allowed to see= nice write
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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